Lyrics and vocals for 1 song

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I'm working on a song and I would like a second verse added and possibly the first verse and chorus redone just so the vocals are consistent. Attached is an .mp3 of the first verse and chorus that I currently have to give you and idea of what direction I'm trying to go in, I am completely open to any ideas this is my first productions using vocals and I really want to knock it out of the park. If there's anything else I can provide that would make this easier in anyway please let me know.