Taylor Swift Remix - mix/master

Hi, I never release any of my mixes to the public because I don't think they're "good enough". I've liked where this mix is going but I just want to know if you think you could make it sound better/fuller/crisper -- to where people would want to listen to it. I've never had a track mixed or mastered before so I just want to know if you think this has potential to be good. If so, I'd like to work with you. Thanks, - Luke